Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Clouded by smoke Part 1

There once was a boy named Benjamin. Benjamin was about to be in a really bad issue. Ben was a very smart boy who wasn't very popular. Let me describe him a little bit more though. Ben was short and a little chubby. He was a pos was invited to a party that was hosted by his best friend. The thing about his best friend was that his best friend was popular. Ben was so excited to go to a party with popular kids because that may have been his chance to become popular himself. What he didn't know was that if he went to that party he would sign his own deathwish for the future. That night while the party was far from over, a lot of the guest started going upstairs. So of course, Ben followed. When he got upstairs he did not see anyone in the dark. He also smelled something really wierd. He went into his friend' room and found everyone sitting around his friend. I am going to stop the story here.


TO BE CONTINUED

1 comment:

epoh snikpmot said...

This story has a lot of suspense. You don't know what's going to happen, although maybe you can guess. I'm glad the person started writing it. I hope it will have a happy ending someday.